Eternal Waters

It was hard to write, but with love as inspiration, it was easier.

Like my love, the water flows

Bathing our mind and souls

Down the streams

Of my dreams

The water falls;

These waters are eternal.

 

Droplets of hope drip down the drain

Water falling down from endless rain

Like my love, the water knows

Only it can fix our souls

Let the rain

Soothe my pain

As the water never stalls;

These waters are eternal.

 

Down the rapids falls my name

Love is not only game

Like my love, the water dreams

A dream that to my soul may seem

Like just a lake

Or a river

Such a mistake

Is a disaster

For it symbolizes my eternal love;

These are my eternal waters.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Beautifully vivid, rich and profound in your passion and your deeply moving love, flowing like water... Absolutely brilliant... Such a joy to read...