Your Priceless Smile

What is better than shiny gold?

What could be sweeter than lies untold?

It is a treasure I cannot hold

A priceless expression that cannot be sold.

 

Your smile, so pure

So gentle and true

A smile that can cure

The sadness in you

 

Sweet candy I taste

When your lips curl merrily

Oh, how I want to kiss this smile

That haunts me endlessly!

Author's Note

This is one of the rare poems which I don't write spontaniously; I wrote this one at school when I had nothing else to do.

Reviews

[@zeewhykay]

Sweet !
Fait du bien de voir une quebecoise ici !

I like this one, its honest and pure. It also flows very very smoothly. The rhyming scheme is also refreshing, A
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Nicely done !

[Karen666]

Sweet :D

[An owl on the moon]

So beautifully expressive, passionate, tender, and lifting to the spirit... And yes, there are smiles that move us just like this! Wonderful write, my friend!

[Astrid Hamilton]

To kiss a smile would hinder the encompassing of any approaching frown;
this made me smile.

Thank you for sharing your beauty.

=)