Eternelle Represaille (Eternal Grudge)

I wrote this today, and I made the translation after typing it up.

Tu m'a arraché à mon innocence

Détruis ma persévérance

Noyé dans cette maudite romance

Planté la semence de démence...

Tu m'a transformé de la mauvaise manière

Tu as franchis mes plus intimes frontières

Ignoré mes prières

Engendré ma brûlante colère...

Tu as éteindu le feu

Qui brûlait dans mes yeux

Tu a empiré le creux

Qu'il ya a dans mon milieu...

Pour cela je te condamne

À subir les représailles contre ton âme

À bruler dans les éternelles flammes

Que tu mérite pour le mal contre nous qui t'aimâmes...

 

Translation

You have stripped me of my innocence

Destroyed my perseverance

Drowned me in this damned romance

Planted the seed of insanity...

You have transformed me in the wrong way

You have crossed my most intimate barriers

Ignored my prayers

Engendered my anger...

You have put out the fire

That burned in my eyes

The hole in my chest is now worst

Than it once was because of you...

For this I condemn you

To suffer the grudge against your soul

To burn in the eternal flames

That you deserve for the hurt against us who hath loved you...

 

Reviews

[nostal]

Powerful. Amazing.

[An owl on the moon]

Such an awesome sense of power in your brilliant words! Absolutely amazed by your ability to flow in the duality of French and English... One can feel the pain, the rage, the betrayal... So powerful!