Treasure upon a moonless Night...

Treasure upon a moonless Night...

A Poem by Charlène Boutin
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Random thoughts.

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The moonless night appears to me once again

I am overwhelmed by the dark feeling it releases

The urge of pressing my delicate fingertips

Against the shadows that are the creases

Of my imagination-

My only salvation.

My fingers are cold

And against me I hold

The treasure of the night.

This treasure will chase my fright

And lull me to sleep tonight.

This untold treasure

Defies the laws of my nature

Tangles my emotions

Into a scarlet devotion...

Yes, love warms me up upon this moonless night

But will freeze my heart if I grip on too tight.

 

 

 

© 2008 Charlène Boutin


Author's Note

Charlène Boutin
Damn, I've had better boosts of inspiration before.

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You write so vividly, lifting the darkness and the light to dance with your words. The mix of shorter and longer phrases tends to move the mind faster and slower, making the heart race. This line is my favorite: "This treasure will chase my fright, And lull me to sleep tonight." So gentle, painting away the fear with peace...



Posted 15 Years Ago


Psh don't put yourself down.
The image of touch a shadow is really amazing,
and there could be so many different interpretations of shadows being salvation.
Nice write.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on December 8, 2008

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Charlène Boutin
Charlène Boutin

Montréal and Val-d'Or, Canada



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There's more to this world than we see. Artists are gifted with the vision of this world, and can bring forward these visions to others. The world I see goes beyond my eyes, beyond my own life. I hop.. more..

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