Inside

I wrote this during my first heartbreak.

 

Since I am myself

And others don’t know

Nobody can read

The truth that I tow.

Your visualization

Of the world as you see

Will not be the same

As the one that is in me.

For me, what you’ve done

Won’t be forgotten in years

But for you, what you’ve done

Did not bring you any tears.

I only wanted to help

You wanted more

You transformed my efforts

In something that made me sore.

When I try to talk

About all of these things

You threaten to punish me

If I am not forgetting.

Do not go and think

I’ll hold in my pain

I’ll let the tears flow

And hope it’s not in vain.

I’ll do everything

Possible for me

To make you realize

That you really can’t see

What is going on

All the time in my head

And meanwhile, tonight…

Just remember what I said.

Author's Note

I realize I don't have a very extended vocabulary lol.

Reviews

[The 13th Eros]

I wanted to start at the beginning of you. Such a depth of emotional expression; the pain of that first heartbreak. How it leaves deep scars that always remind one of the sunrise of the soul, left marred and broken in the first night. May you find one so filled with love and passion as you are.

[Khalab Darnell]

Its very deep and it makes me think about what go's on around me I love it.♥

[An owl on the moon]

You write vividly, and your pain is so real... Perfect expression and such a beautiful, bittersweet poem...

Craig

[PasDeChat]

Nice, a bit long for someone with ADD...lol Keep writing!