Demonic Rain

 

And the rain fell

Pitter pattering out the pain

Arousing my feelings of doubt

Innocence transparent

Lets the wild thing out

 

And the rain fell

Purple with passion

Dancing about my body in a most sensuous fashion

Arousing my feelings of doubt

Letting the wild thing out

 

And the rain fell

Kissing away my tears

Washing away my fears

Arousing my feelings of doubt

Letting the wild thing out

 

And the rain fell

Disintegrating the effect of all negative emotions

Drowning me in the depth of all five oceans

Seizing my feelings of doubt

The wild thing is out.

                 by C. Mitchell

 

Reviews

[whiteNight]

Im really loving the vibe of this poem, its deep and very powerful - especially with the repeated 'wild things' as stated before. Awesome:D

[Melissa Kesead]

I love the "wild thing" persona and the way the rain takes on a personality. Wonderful write.