At the Wake of Rage

                            by C. Mitchell

sour, sunken, saddened faces

dark filled rooms, odd perfumes

cursing,cursed coils of hatred

wicked smiles walk down the isles

shadows shapeless, soul less, mate less

lonely hearts torn all apart

withered weeping whining eyes

caging lies, desperate cries

incoherent spoken words

unforgiving tongue not living long

eternal fires burning liars

holy light, the angels fight

fearless leaders

machine guns

      blacken the sun      

    now everything’s done

 

no more pain

no more fear

 no more tears

 

                        Rage is dead

                     

Reviews

[Melissa Kesead]

Very dark poetry but it expresses a lot of emotion that, unfortunately, people feel sometimes.

To be helpful, I did want to point out that I think wining eyes should be spelled whining. Great work! Can't wait to read more!

Melissa

[charleybear]

very angry but very deep. well written, it flows wonderfully. good job