Without a Little Rain (VERSION TWO)

Let me know which you guys like better!!

It’s interesting how connected such opposites can be.

How opposites, in the end, always coincide,

How ear-to-ear smiles are followed by,

Hidden by, an unfathomable amount of tears,

How uncontrollable laughter turns into tortuous pain,

How passion contorts itself into passionate hate,

With one whisper of a wariness.

But then again,

There’s no rainbow without a little rain.  

Reviews

[A.Lee]

I actually really like them both, just in different ways. They both carry a different emotion, a different feel to them, while arriving at the same point. Great work on both versions.

[Chantel]

Liked the other one a bit better, but this is still good. :) Same idea with a different twist, a differnt kind of emotion it seems...

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. Must have opposite to know good or bad. I like the poem. A lot to think about. A very good ending to a excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[zappy]

Rain youre really good with that topic. Like the poem though its great.