A Restful Fairytale

A sonnet.

Above this sunken bed I float away,

As I will dream a complex fairytale

That rivals all the other tales today,

And feast on tangled thoughts that will prevail.

I float as high as naked eyes can see

Until I reach that brightly beaming star

That takes the breath away that strengthens me.

I rest my tired arms, they’ve brought me far,

Upon the lovely light that burns so long.

I look around and see the distance that I’ve come

And smile with the knowledge that I’m strong.

The endless sky now questions where I’m from,

For how it knows my mind is but a mess

As I know not where my home is; I rest.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this poem. I like the peacefulness of the poem. I loved the serene energy coming from this. You did a nice job. Thanks for sharing.

[Chantel]

This was delightful :) As what Coyote Poetry and Marie Harrison said, it's so peaceful...after reading it the second time, I actually felt a lot better than before I'd started. (Although it might have helped that I was eating chocolate too, heehee)
Beautiful poem, loved it :)

[Marie Harrison]

I'm with Coyote, this is a peaceful tale.

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes it was a restful fairytale.I like the feel of peace and a journey of great distance. A very nice fairytale. Just stars and light to keep the hope alive. A very good poem.
Coyote