Obsessed

Just another boy...

I’m obsessed.

I simply cannot help myself.

He’s a disease that has infected my mind

He runs through my veins

And pumps his deadly stare through my body

Until it punctures my heart

 

I’m obsessed.

And it’s helplessly unavoidable.

I dream about those eyes never escaping mine

How I wish they never did.

It felt as if we were watching each other forever

Just staring into the abyss’ of each other’s souls.

I dream about his soft lips christening my cheeks

Slowly creeping towards my lips

So delicate, yet so passionate

I can still feel the electricity.

 

If only they knew. 

Reviews

[Twizzler]

Freaking LOVE this! So strong and deliberate. Your words evoke the emotion you feel inside. This is what makes great writing.

[Chantel]

"I dream about those eyes never escaping mine"

That line was very powerful to me. Like seriously, shivers. You are an excellent writer, and this poem was superb, especially that line...wow. :) Keep writing! :)

[karmic]

This is well put. Everyone has fantasies about the one they care about; even if the person doesn’t feel the same. Nice write.

[Marie Harrison]

Excellent example of obsession. Fabulous job