Broke(n).

Broke(n).

A Poem by C.J.G.
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I am broken.

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He's broken me down.
Broken me so many times
The pieces have become too tiny
To try to piece back together.
Each day I scramble to collect them all,
But once they are gathered in my hand,
They break again.
I break again.
They've become so fragile 
Even the slightest touch
Will break each piece even more.
They are beyond repair. 
I am beyond repair. 

© 2010 C.J.G.


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There was something so vulnerable,so very fragile about the subject of the write here it got to me as soon as i read it,this was lovely and one who has been this broken can relate to this.
Come to think of it,how beautiful is this world of words..in the real world one would never confess how broken on e feels,but here we do giving our all and that is how we connect on a more deeper level *smiles.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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There was something so vulnerable,so very fragile about the subject of the write here it got to me as soon as i read it,this was lovely and one who has been this broken can relate to this.
Come to think of it,how beautiful is this world of words..in the real world one would never confess how broken on e feels,but here we do giving our all and that is how we connect on a more deeper level *smiles.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like what familiarity does sometime in relationships. A very moving poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


It takes a lot of strength to admit that you are broken. That's the first step. I like the way you identify yourself with the pieces. That they really are pieces of you, they're not some detached feelings.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is really good. I can definitely relate to this poem. Great job capturing the emotions and baring them like this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good poem. I can relate and it is a good poem like I said before. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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