(What if) It's Really It.

More of my overwhelming thoughts of him put into a poetic structure... I apologize.

What if this is it? I mean, really it?

The kind that you read about in romance novels

And see on the big screen?

The kind that weaken your mind and opens your heart?

The kind that only fairy tales can endure until you’ve truly fallen?

What if we are meant to be together

Until death do us part?

Have I found the person that is the counter point to my soul?

The long lost that I have now found?

 

Or what if it is just young love?

That love that is described in click-flicks and teen TV shows?

What if it’s just lust and desire that every first love is accompanied by?

 

But can’t young love last? Last until your dying wish?

Last through the journey we call living?

Last through the life we have always dreamt about.

My heart is a song, and every time I see your face

It sings the chorus.

How can this not be it? That real it?

 

My body melts from the slightest whisper of his name,

How can this not be it?

My heart races from the sight of his eyes,

How can this not be it?

My mind sores over the wonders of possibilities,

How can this not be it?

 

He says it is forever, I could lie here with your forever.

So what if this is it? I mean, really it?

 

Reviews

[JenLyn]

Wow fantastic write, keep it up! :)

[GunMetal]

I was very drawn in with this. There seemed to be a level of excitement in your questioning of it. The title made me think this would be about something that was ending, but I like that it mislead me, it surprised me.

[A.Lee]

I like the way this one is full of questions. And none of them are answered. You can tell this one came straight from real feelings. Good write.

[deeps]

Wow! This is so heart tugging and so very emotional.
This is written well and expressed so well.
This is one amazing write.