Fate Walks
A Book by Brea
 Book 1 in the Cavaldi Birthright  © 2016 Brea
Author's Note
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Need honest feedback on plot, character development, etc. Let me know about lagging, plot holes, whether the dialogue works, excess adverbs, you name it. So far this book has been rejected multiple times and I need beta readers to help me out! Please and thank you
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BreaFloyd, VA
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I am a poet, short story author, and aspiring novelist. When not writing, I'm likely binge watching HGTV, planning my next home renovation project, or annoying others by threatening to put them in my .. more..
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