The Last Dream

A girl who's from a small town dreams of being out in the big wide world, living in usa. Her dream is to become a professional crime investigator. she fights through rough times like learning to cope with her brothers suicide, he was her only inspiration to follow her dreams since he died, she gave up hope, as her parents grieving resulted in not believing in her. One day she meets a lonely old man who inspires her again and helps her. She finally makes it into the profession she dreams of. After a year of living the dream her parents call her..and apoligize for everything, they realise they waqnt to be involved with their daughter. after a long call they arrange to be on the next flight to usam, flight 146 at 15.00 and arrive to her the following morning. That evening she's on the job and turns out it's a disaster on flight 146. As it's her jop she has to work on it, knowing her parents are on there she breaks down mid job. Turns out her parents missed their flight and will see her tomorrow :)

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

Great write, but I agree, this could be an amazing book.

[Victoria Thornton]

Wow nice

[Roxie Demonia]

wow. this a good story. all girls can relate to it.

[Emma Lee]

This would be a good book and I'd by it. Good write and a nice plot. ^^

Love Emily

[Daydreamer54]

waqnt-want
That evening she's on the job and - That evening, she's on the job.
jop-job.
Other than that, it's ok. I think it would been better if these really did turn out to be a novel though and we didn;t already have everythiung told to us how things would turn out.

[Ruth]

Sounds as though you've got yourself a novel in the making hon!
:)
xx

[*Evelen*]

Aww yay the parents are alive! I was totally relieved when I read the last sentence. Well done.

[deeps]

i like it i think it would be okay for a book.

[Undying Glory]

are you writing a book about this? sure hope you write it soon, i'd love to see how this would turn out...great

[TAO]

Well... First... I honestly don't like the writing style, when grammar and style are a consideration. However, I find the sheer honesty of this piece is...endearing. What I take from it is...hope...love. Its beauty is simplistic, and sweet. Very nice. Well done.

You better write this book.