The Begging Buzzard

The Begging Buzzard

A Poem by Ray Hamilton
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The Dueling Poets Series

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The Begging Buzzard   

Begging like a puppy
This cell sure is cold and yucky
Please Mouth, won't you let me out
She gave me a wink, laughed and shouted

I'm in the jailhouse now
Mouth put me here some how
I was just doing my Buzzard fly by
Although the gold pen, did catch my eye

Please have mercy on me
I'll be a good boy, you will see
On good behavior, I may get a day out
With the Mouths personal guards no doubt

Yes I'm in the jailhouse now
I must find a way out some how
With Mouth as the warden, of this jail
I guess all my jail breaks, will surely fail



The Mouth of the south had me shot down
I knew I was in trouble, ~ the minute I hit the ground

 

 


Ray Hamilton
{ The Great Canadian Buzzard }
© Copyright 8 / 2009
All rights Reserved

 

 

 

© 2009 Ray Hamilton


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much like a stage play! Definitely unique. Good job Ray!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Great piece and I lve the way you have put on the animated parts of your work..I am not smart enough about a computer to do all of those things..No children..Kids do it best..Valentine

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ha ha! Something completely different and full of humour . How refreshing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A very good piece

Posted 12 Years Ago


humor is a great tool very clever

Posted 13 Years Ago


interesting. i liked the format, mary

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Ray Hamilton
Ray Hamilton

Morrisburg Ontario Canada, Canada



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