The Begging Buzzard

The Dueling Poets Series

The Begging Buzzard    Begging like a puppy This cell sure is cold and yucky Please Mouth, won't you let me out She gave me a wink, laughed and shouted I'm in the jailhouse now Mouth put me here some how I was just doing my Buzzard fly by Although the gold pen, did catch my eye Please have mercy on me I'll be a good boy, you will see On good behavior, I may get a day out With the Mouths personal guards no doubt Yes I'm in the jailhouse now I must find a way out some how With Mouth as the warden, of this jail I guess all my jail breaks, will surely fail The Mouth of the south had me shot down I knew I was in trouble, ~ the minute I hit the ground     Ray Hamilton { The Great Canadian Buzzard } © Copyright 8 / 2009 All rights Reserved

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

much like a stage play! Definitely unique. Good job Ray!

[Valentine]

Great piece and I lve the way you have put on the animated parts of your work..I am not smart enough about a computer to do all of those things..No children..Kids do it best..Valentine

[MOON]

Ha ha! Something completely different and full of humour . How refreshing!

[Mary C]

A very good piece

[Cherrie]

humor is a great tool very clever

[imm's place]

interesting. i liked the format, mary