There Is No End

There Is No End     Abuse is all you have ever seen You yourself are just plain mean What you have done to me Not many would ever believe   The abuse it seems to never end First I thought you were my friend We would be together till the very end On you I could always depend   Blinded by my foolish heart I thought we would never part You told me we were meant to be When in love the truth you never see   Turn back the pages of time to our very first day I will quickly turn and run the other way There's no way I would ever stay For your mind games I do not play   Slowly in your stealth mode You worm your way friend to friend Does this harassment never end You look like an angel to everyone else But in the end you have to live with yourself   I can just turn and run away But with yourself you must stay You justify what you have done to me So in your own eyes, good is all you see I have no trouble to sleep at night So kick me again it's alright   Love for you I thought would never end I wish I had never met you my abusive friend What you have done to me will never mend Because you never stop and let it end In another's arms you wished to be Well you are there, ~ so stop harassing me       By Ray Hamilton Not a poet and I know it! © Copyright 7 / 2008 All rights Reserved     Visit me at The Poet's Nest

Reviews

[Aspiring Angel]

This is so strong and perfectly written Ray my friend. I am so sorry that you have been hurt so badly. What is with me, with friends that get so terribly hurt by love?
I can tell that you most certainly spoke your heart here and did it without malice. just fact. Wonderful work and I love this rendition of Thunder Rolls. I have not been able to find a good midi for it. Think you found it with this one. Blessings, Lesa

[darkgurl]

This is ever so sad but wonderfully written I can feel the hurt in this. Sorry you have been hurt like this....Kim

[Donna DeLong Matthews a..]

Those we trust, love and really open our hearts to
are the ones that can cut us the deepest.
Sugar this was awesome as always... Hate that you
had to go thru this but Darlin it is truly their loss
Hugs and Luv
D

[Suelou]

This is so sad. I have been through the same thing, before.

[These Haunted Hallways]

Ooo, that was good. I so can relate to this here. It's so hard trying to make a person you hate go away, and to leave u alone forever. It's brutal, i swear. This really hit it on the head. Awesome work!

B.A.

[Michael]

More than anything I think this is an ode to honesty. In all aspects of life we are mislead from time to time. What hurts most is allowing ourselves to be taken so. I really like the point of this one. It applies to much more than just the subject at hand.

[Don Stabler]

Well you're a poet for sure there my friend. the art is more sensable I think. you must care
anyways. anybody would. the love sense being thing is so personal.

[Angelic Darkness]

This is a heartfelt story, sonmething I'm sure we have all felt...betrayed, trusting someone who hurt us.
Things happen for a reason, and we take that reason and go on, live. Sometimes it takes time, but we
can't just give up or we'll never be happy. You will get there Ray:)

[Janice Ann]

Well, I can't imagine being so naive not to get the hint to leave a person alone, but some people, just can't get it...just can't let go...

You my friend will get through this and hopefully one day soon "she" will move the F on! Good luck!

Love,
Janice Ann

[DRIVEN]

It is hard when someone does not get the message to leave you alone...their agenda is power/over and it is abusive. The poem is good. I will gladly hold them while you smack them upside the head:_