Deception On The Internet

Just a Poem

Deception On The Internet         I can tell you I am The spirit of King Tutt Just in this odd mans Body I am stuck     I can tell you My mother is Queen of the nile I sometimes visit her for awhile But I am just plain Ray { Not a Poet } I'm not afraid to show it I am just trying to be me Humorous man is what you see     Although I hide My hurt feeling in my poetry The real Ray is still who you see There is no one else I want to be I'm just trying to be me     I do not try to live a lie Though some others do I don't know why Please take me for who I am Or on your way out Please don't let the door slam     Live your life the best you can For life passes fast, like sifting sand Before you know it life will be gone There are no lies in the great beyond     There you will sing a different song You will pay for the things you have done wrong Your lying days are now done There is no place you can run     Just be yourself Good friends will except you For who you really are If a liar you are made out to be Your heart will sure be in misery I know the internet is a wonderful tool But still you shouldn't play people for fools     I hope you like who I am Just a plain and simple man Honest and true is how I stand I don't know any other way I'm just plain simple Ray         My father always said You can't believe anything you hear and only half what you see Some things on this internet would have brought him to his knees   By Ray Hamilton Not a poet and I know it! © Copyright 7 / 2008 All rights Reserved   Please visit me at The Poet's Nest

Author's Note

Just be yourself is what I always say

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Excellent presentation. Your writing is clear and even in verse.

If a liar you are made out to be
Your heart will sure be in misery

No truer lines, the inernet a playground to play pretend.

Nice write.

[darkgurl]

I really like this write, Love these lines so true, This is a very well written write here, i liked this bunches.

"There you will sing a different song
You will pay for the things you have done wrong
Your lying days are now done
There is no place you can run "

[Fran Marie]

To thine ownself be true~ it's always best to be who you are and not

weave a web of deceit~ honesty is its own reqard~I know, sounds Cliche but oh so true

THanks Ray for sharing this great piece and for being a great friend on WC ~Fran

[emz]

Very true... if we are true to ourselves then we will be happy and as long as the people we love love us for who we are that is all that really matters
lovely poem Ray

xx

[Angelic Darkness]

You are correct. We have to be ourselves, and not be so naive to
believe everything. It's so easy to pretend on the Internet, and
it's hard not to get caught up in emotions, but it all boils down to
we have to think of ourselves. AD

[DRIVEN]

enjoyed this!!!

[The Dark Priest]

So very true!

[Lia]

Really great piece. Your dad was a very smart man. Really good piece. Thanks for shraing x