Under Her Spell

~ ~ Dark fantasy / Humor ~ ~

Under Her Spell       Can you really tell When you are under a witches spell Are these women human or something straight from hell     Pure evil they can be If they have a hate on for thee In the shadows they stay unseen Brutal fierce and unbelievably mean If she has her eye on you There's not much you can do     A spell here and then a potion Your life is over if they take the notion Dark as the black gates of hell Your very soul she will try to sell You hang on tight for your dear life Your in serious trouble if she's already your wife     Is she a witch you can never tell Is there a way to break the spell In her book your afraid to look Afraid your very soul she already took     Burn the book you say I can break the spell in this way But if my soul is in this book I'm sure my soul she already took Will this set me totally free Are you sure You wouldn't lie to me     With shaking hands I take a look You won't believe the frightening things I see in this book Pure evil in the dark pages of rhyme I sadly see The souls of quite a few lay within these pages so helpless they be     Laugh if you must My greatest fear has come true Your soul is in here too   By Ray Hamilton Not a poet and I know it! © Copyright 7 / 2008 All rights Reserved   Please Visit Me At The Poet's Nest

Author's Note

This is just Dark fantasy / Humor
This was not intended to offend the nice ladies out there
Being under your spell would be a good thing LOL

Reviews

[Aspiring Angel]

Humor with a bit of truth in the mixture of the witches brew I fear. I already look forward to opening your words. Never quite sure what I will find within, and yet I know, what ever I find,is well worth the time I stay. Truthfully I always wish for more time to read your work and you never know before
the night is over, I may be back. Am I under some sort of spell ya think? Guess at least I am in the right month for it and what better poets page to find myself
bewithed within?

Blessings my friend,
Lesa

[DRIVEN]

Be careful what you "witch" for....

"Can you really tell
When you are under
a witches spell "???????????

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

You are a fantastic poet. Nice job. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Helena]

rofl!! I'm falling about laughing here after reading all the previous comments!

Wow Ray, I'm very impressed with this. The presentation, background music.....so delightfully
evil and dark! Loved it!

I've been known to concocte some mean potions in the witching hour, chant spells in the dead of night
under a full moon...NO! Just kidding!

Pen on poet.....love your poetry, its so entertaining!

Helena :)

[emz]

Haha, i love reading your work Ray, i love your humour and all the images you use to acompany your poems.

This in another fine write and once again you made me smile

xx

[HoorayForUnderdog]

I embrace my inner witch! MwahHaaaaHaaaHaaaHaaaa!

[Angelic Darkness]

This was a humorous one;). Nice flow and rhyme, but you
better be carful, you could be mine LOL!!! AD

[Samuel Dickens]

Where did you meet my ex-wife? Whatever you do, don't let her drive your hot rod! A good one, Ray. One of your best, I'd say.

[Suelou]

We aren't all witches.

[Poetic Injustice]

Ewwwwww Ewwwww Witchy woman .....
I find myself attracted to them (oy)
Nice write, Ray.

- Jay aka Dagonet(errrrnut)