Deceitful Lies / Harsh Goodbyes

Deceitful Lies / Harsh Goodbyes

A Poem by Ray Hamilton
"

~ ~ Keeping my promise, but I still have to live ~ ~

"

 

 

 

{ Not a Poet and I know It }

Since You've Gone Midi

 

 

Deceitful Lies / Harsh Goodbyes

You told me ~ I was your love
Sent to you from the great man above
Your Knight in shining armor
You were quite the charmer

 

 

You had dreams of me all of your life
I would come to you and make you my wife
We got married the very next year
I was thrilled that in my life ~ you were here

 

 

You were told right from the very start
That if we should somehow ever part
A burden to you I would never be
Me again you would never see

 

 

Respectfully I have kept my word
From me you have never heard
On the web sites that you call home
You will never see me roam
But why do you follow me to mine
I move on ~ time after time

 

 

From life's problems I have never run away
Stood my ground and faced them each and every day
Slowly I clime up that ladder of life
Slippery at times / a broken rung / a lost wife

 

 

WritersCafe here I have made my home
Of you I try not to moan and grown
Can you just not stay away
You follow me from site to site
I suppose you have the right
These games you know I do not play
So here on WriterCafe I think I will stay
Respectfully Your X
Ray

 

By
Ray Hamilton
Not a poet and I know it!

© Copyright 7 / 2008
All rights Reserved

 

 

 

© 2008 Ray Hamilton


Author's Note

Ray Hamilton
When a man try�s his best to keep his promise and disappear
but the woman keeps following him one site to another
What is a man to do?
One can't run / move web sites forever!!

There are some nice people I have met here at WritersCafe, I have planted Roots here!!

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This is where you need to stay
with all your friends on the WC cafe~'

THanks for sharing, always a joy to read your verse my friend~Fran Marie

Posted 16 Years Ago


Hi Ray,
I think I've made my feelings clear to you in that message yesterday. Stay with us and ignore the other party.
No-one here is going to think any the less of you, no matter what is said.
David.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Glad you are going to stay, Ray. Most likely if you stay on this site and ignore the other person then that person will get bored and go away. Most likely the other person is only looking to get a reaction out of you. So stay and be a part of this community because you have friends here who care.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Your words are honest, and from the heart. I know of
this story, and you have us here on WC to be there for
you when you need us. You have our words, our hugs,
and this is where you need to be. AD

Posted 16 Years Ago


written well

Posted 16 Years Ago


Now this is plain awesome!, I like this complete hoensty here, well written....Kim

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Lia
Really amazing piece. Really touching. x

Posted 16 Years Ago


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emz
Very sad but honest... stay where you are happy and respected my friend


x

Posted 16 Years Ago


I'm with you Ray. Your home is here.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on July 19, 2008
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Ray Hamilton
Ray Hamilton

Morrisburg Ontario Canada, Canada



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