Animated World

~ Humor ~

Animated World There's an animated mouse That lives in an animated house   With animated sea breeze That blows animated leaves Off animated trees   By the animated lake Oh for goodness sake   You can even get an animated girl For your perfect animated world With an animated child That has a sweet animated smile   There's an animated dog Chasing an animated frog Down by your animated pond I could go on and on OH OH the buzzard's are starting to circle My face must be turning purple Before my mind goes missing I think I'll just go fishing   I need a break from this animated world Then again, that was a cute animated girl Something in your eye honey  I 've got to get out of here ~ and go fishing!!!!   By Ray Hamilton Not a poet and I know it! © Copyright 7 / 2008 All rights Reserved   Please visit me at The Poet's Nest

 

Author's Note

Some times don't you think you have animation overload
Well maybe after reading this poem LOL

Reviews

[Aspiring Angel]

We are keeping you perhaps far too busy in our own little adventures to see such wonderful, uplifting,cute writes such as this come from you to us. Really enjoyed my friend. Sorry I have not dropped in for a bit but got to tell you the ear plugs you sent me the other day has helped. ROTFL :) Thinkin of you and always wishing for you sunshine.

Hugs,
Lesa

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Hey, that's cool! how'd you do that? i've never seen that before. you could make websites and make a lucrative business off of it!
well, i'll be back to visit your page again soon.

kena

[Fran Marie]

OH OH the buzzard's are starting to circle
My face must be turning purple

What a delightful lil' piece this is~a very enjoyable read~

you get a 100 points just for rhyming the word Purple~lol

Great Job!! on this one, Ray~Fran

[Rodney Russ]

Very challenging piece. The ending is very comedic. Nice use of images to support the illusions in the work.

[Janice Ann]

Too cute! Ha...It sure does feel like this little world of ours is just too animated...but I love it! LOL

Fantastic my friend!
Janice ann

[Suelou]

Very cute Mr. hamilton. Sure put a smile on my face. Thank you!

[Samuel Dickens]

Will you be using animated worms for bait?

[Dorchadas]

I love this Ray. So funny, clever and witty. Very original. Brilliant ;)

[darkgurl]

This is to clever and way to cute, like this brought a smile to my face.

[HoorayForUnderdog]

Ray you are an animation maniac! too funny!