Loves War Wounds

~ Collaboration by Dagonut and Ray { Not a Poet } ~

Loves War Wounds Rays Verses ************ At first she had great desire Then again,~ she could have been a liar Told me how much she loved me Then again,~ I should have waited to really see   She really had great love for me Then again,~ she could have just used me to get where she wanted to be Does this thing called love really exist Now that it's all over I'm not sure of this Just add another,~ to the hurt me list   Dagonut Verses ************ Giving my heart without reserve Takes more than a little nerve In her palm all it takes is a grip And through her fingers my love drips   I've never gotten my heart back in one piece Former loves keep souvenirs So now it looks like Swiss cheese Paid for with heartache and tears   Rays Verses ************ My heart beaten and used over the years Its enough to bring any man to tears Is there an honest woman,~ left somewhere That wants true love and for me will really care   The heart is a very fragile thing True love is all I wish her to bring I have looked for her from shore to shore To bad you can't buy true love in a store I would buy it before it is to late For soon I won't be able to afford the freight   Dagonut adds ... *************** But love cannot be purchased with A coin, a bill, a gold bar or gem It's priceless and attained only if The person you love, resides within   On the battlefield of love lay remains Of a hundred billion broken hearts Ironically still within them contained Is a singular glowing spark   The puddles formed of their misery Mixed together amongst the debris Who knows, maybe love can arise Amongst the casualties By Dagonut and Ray Hamilton © Copyright 7 / 2008 All rights Reserved   Thank You Goes Out To Dagonut For his Talented Pen In This Fun Write No offence Intended To The Ladies Without You Life Would Be Worth Nothing   Please visit Dagonut He is a very talented poet Click picture

Author's Note

This was written as two men having a conversation back and forth about their lost loves,
I have no idea if this has been done before or not, but its something different { I think }

Reviews

[Donna DeLong Matthews a..]

Ray and Dagonut this is beautiful and really deeply touched me
You guys have blenede ink so beautifully with this tragic path of
pain that neither gender is immune to ... As said above the heart
is so very fragile and needs to be handled with great love and care.

Wonderful job guys.
Hugs and Love to you both
D

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A very nice write. Beautifully penned. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Aspiring Angel]

I did not see anything of you new today, so came in search of yet another wonderful write, and yep .... I found it. I have just rescently met Dagonut and I have been visiting his work along with yours and a few others, since arriving here. Both of you always seem to find my smiles. Always such gentlemen and both of you have that impish little grin that makes me chuckle each time I see your pictures. LOL A great collaboration of pens and talent.

Blessings,
Lesa

[KAREN BROWN]

Yes love really excist,not all women use men but the ones who do make it harder for the ones that only want true love. there are people like me were material things mean nothing to me nor money i don't have to be rich as long as i can pay my bills im ok and theres some were money and material things are everything to them, but when you die you can't take it with you right.

[Lena M. P.]

I really enjoyed this camaraderie. Good work guys!

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"But love cannot be purchased with
A coin, a bill, a gold bar or gem
It's priceless and attained only if
The person you love, resides within

On the battlefield of love lay remains
Of a hundred billion broken hearts
Ironically still within them contained
Is a singular glowing spark"

My favorite stanzas . . .

Kudos to you both, for sharing your hearts, your souls, your pain, and yet, your hopefulness for a love that will never sour.

Muah!

[Valentine]

It seems like the two of you write very well together..It made for an interesting write as really there are two sides to this coming from two people..nice write..God bless..Valentine

[Don Stabler]

the trick is to find a woman wiothout a large amount of baggage or with minimal wounds of her own. entertaining one and one's baggage
and the subsequent frosty wearing away after initial infatuation. you're just open for the altercation of wound infliction. sorry Ray
great poem . you and Dagonut- right on

[Tina Kline]

I really like this poem. The thoughts and feelings are true
for both men and women when it comes to this
complicated thing called LOVE. I really enjoyed reading
this. Great poem to both of you!

Tina