~ Let's Dance ~

~ Let's Dance ~

A Poem by Ray Hamilton
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* * * Influenced by a song a dear friend sent me * * *

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Let's Dance

 

A very good friend, sent this song to me
Made my feet move, uncontrollably
I want to grab her and dance the night away
Twirling around that dance floor, as this song plays

 


 

Good friends are very precious to me
This friend is one of a kind you see
Love flows out of this lady's loving heart
Before pen hits paper and the poem ever starts

 


 

Blessed with a talent like you have never seen
God sure took great care when creating this lovely dream
One would feel blessed twirling around in the arms of this queen
Dancing on a cloud with the most loving heart man will ever see

 


 

The dance floor would light up, as if dancing under a romantic moon
As our feet move gracefully as one,  across the neon lit room
Dancing in this lovely lady's arms, would surely be a gift from God
Her kindness has sure made this mans heart throb

 


 

Dedicated to a very dear friend

Lets Dance

 

By
Ray Hamilton
Not a poet and I know it!

© Copyright 7 / 2008
All rights Reserved

 

Please Visit Me at The Poet's Nest 

 

 
 
 

 

© 2008 Ray Hamilton


Author's Note

Ray Hamilton
* * * Dedicated to a very dear friend * * *

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This is so very beautiful my friend! What a lucky lady that has captured your attention.

Blessings,
Lesa

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Lia
Beautiful piece, I love the way you wrote it, it flows so wonderfully. Great work xx

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful, romantic poem, Ray.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Deliciously written .. you will turn her head for sure ...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Just lovely, your friend is very lucky.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow that is beauifully said i really loved it a lot. I felt so much happiness and warmth come your writting its great. great writting thank you for sharing it with me. I would love a man to dance with me like that and feel that way.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Can I have the next dance?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful pen flowing here, Ray, you are such a Romantic so and so~

Well DonE my friend~Fran Marie

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I couldn't get enough of that background, it's FABULOUS!!! The poem is well constructed and though I'm not fond of rhyme
I thought this was even and enjoyable with caring thought and emotion...
Cheers,
Helen :-)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Ray this was so awesome and any lady would feel privilged to
share the dance floor with you. These words fromy your talented
pen and big beautiful heart brought tears to my eyes. You are such a special
one of a kind my friend.
Have a blessed weekend
Hugs
D

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Morrisburg Ontario Canada, Canada



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