* * * Influenced by a song a dear friend sent me * * *
Let's Dance
A very good friend, sent this song to me
Made my feet move, uncontrollably
I want to grab her and dance the night away
Twirling around that dance floor, as this song plays
Good friends are very precious to me
This friend is one of a kind you see
Love flows out of this lady's loving heart
Before pen hits paper and the poem ever starts
Blessed with a talent like you have never seen
God sure took great care when creating this lovely dream
One would feel blessed twirling around in the arms of this queen
Dancing on a cloud with the most loving heart man will ever see
The dance floor would light up, as if dancing under a romantic moon
As our feet move gracefully as one, across the neon lit room
Dancing in this lovely lady's arms, would surely be a gift from God
Her kindness has sure made this mans heart throb
wow that is beauifully said i really loved it a lot. I felt so much happiness and warmth come your writting its great. great writting thank you for sharing it with me. I would love a man to dance with me like that and feel that way.
I couldn't get enough of that background, it's FABULOUS!!! The poem is well constructed and though I'm not fond of rhyme
I thought this was even and enjoyable with caring thought and emotion...
Cheers,
Helen :-)
Ray this was so awesome and any lady would feel privilged to
share the dance floor with you. These words fromy your talented
pen and big beautiful heart brought tears to my eyes. You are such a special
one of a kind my friend.
Have a blessed weekend
Hugs
D
I Am Canadian " A "
These days I have a lot of time on my hands.
Never being a person interested in even reading, it seems unbelievable
to find myself, here writing poetry.
My mind o.. more..