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Wish Upon A Star As I look up, to my delight Stars are shining bright tonight Should I wish upon this falling star Oh my sweet love, tell me where you are     The moon shines gently through the trees Theres no other place, I would rather be I know theres a sweet love, some where for me I just haven't found you, can't you see     Smiling face, eyes that sparkle so bright Are you looking everywhere for me tonight Don't be shy, please don't hide For I will stand there, right by your side       Ever so gently, I shall hold your hand I'd be oh so proud, to be your loving man I long to find an honest loving wife That will love me, for the rest of my life   By Ray Hamilton Not a poet and I know it! © Copyright 6 / 2008 All rights Reserved      Please Visit Me at The Poet's Nest

 

Reviews

[Donna DeLong Matthews a..]

Ray this is one of those things that when you read you just cant help but smile.. What a delightful plea to the heavens
that sparkle almost as bright as this beautiful rendering of your heart.
Truly enjoyed my friend
Hugs
D

[Fran Marie]

Another gem you have penned ~

quite an exquisite piece of poetry~ and well presented~Fran Marie

[darkgurl]

This is so wonderful and ever so beautiful, amazing write.

[Janice Ann]

I could swear that these words are words of a "so called" poet...but since you refuse that title...HEHE...I like this a lot and I believe we all look for the very thing you are searching for my friend...no matter how hurtful it is...this love thing is our addiction! And I can hardly wait to get my fix!

Great write!
Janice Ann

[WordMaster]

You can tell me you're not a poet all you want, but this poem tells me otherwise.

Well written from start to finish, good pace and wonderful ending

Good job my friend