Romantic Love

Love Poem

 

 

Romantic Love

 

As we stand by the waters edge
In each others arms, we make that pledge

In your eyes I see, there is love for me
Should I pursue, or just let you be

 

Close to your shapely body, you hold me just so
I want this moment to last forever, and never let you go

 

Your kisses, are sweet as candy to me
The cloudy future, I wish I could see

I have stumbled, so many times before
My poor heart, feels just like a revolving door

 

When I look in your eyes, the future I think I can see
Is this the truth, or just what I want to believe

 

Yes,~ I have been in love before
One sided love, and sadly not much more

Will you love me forever, and never let me go
What's ahead in life, I wish I could know

 

My heart longs for someone,
who does truly love me
Someone for the rest of my life,
when I wake up each morning I will see

In this true loves arms, I forever want to be
I just want to be loved, Truly Loved, can't you see

 

 

By
Ray Hamilton
Not a poet and I know it!

 

© Copyright 4 / 2008
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Author's Note

There is no treasure on earth more precious than Honest, True, Romantic Love

Reviews

[Phil & Bren's Colla..]

Very romantic and beautifully penned. I agree that there is no treasure on earth more precious than Honest, True, Romantic Love. It is the most wonderful feeling in the world. Great job.

[Fran Marie]

Beautiful poetry, smooth as satin verse flows from your pen~my friend ~Very Romantic piece,penned quite nicely ~THanks for submitting this to the Love ShacK contest~Fran Marie

[darkgurl]

Such a longing, very beautiful and so very well written.

[Janice Ann]

FAN-TAB-ULOUS!

and there is nothing like the romance, that is so beautiful!!

Fantastic!
JaniceAnn