Mystical Love At Sea

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Mystical Love At Sea

 

These old tall ships, how romantic they seem
Sails blowing in the wind, look how this old wood gleams

Sailors are in love with their ships, how can this be
The captain is so much in love, he calls this ship she

 

Some say within these walls, a mystical lady lives, soon you will see
For tonight from these walls, her eyes will be looking down at thee

 

They say I drank to much rum, and that very well may be
Last night I could have sworn, this sailing beauty made love to me

Down from these old walls, she seemed to just glide
I am telling you, she gently floated, right down by my side

This beautys hands, passionate and soft, like silk they did seem
She caressed my whole body, then she made sweet love to me

 

In disbelief I shut my eyes, I swear this is no lie
When the night was all over, she was gone, not even a goodbye

With anticipation I wait, for that magical night to come again
For this mystical lady in the ship, I have fallen in love with, my friend

 

Land lover no longer I will be, now I sail this ship,
for I am her captain, way out here at sea
I will always love this mystical lady, who each night,
makes magical sweet love to me

Mystical love at sea

 

By
Ray Hamilton
Not a poet and I know it !

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Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Wow! This is a really good love poem! It's a great way to describe the captain's love for his ship
or maybe a beautiful ghostly lady was visiting the captian every night. A she who could not
exist apart from the ship. Maybe she and the ship are one and the same! Anyway, very beautifully
written poem! Its so musical the way you wrote it!

Tina

[emmajoy]

Great story within a fine poem... love the format of it too. A romantic style for a romantic story.

'They say I drank too much rum, and that very well may be
Last night I could have sworn, this sailing beauty made love to me..'

'heard that before though not as sweetly put!

Thanks for sharing.

[Nicholas Hallows]

Nice! I've always liked this kind of story poem and am intrigued by old nautical life.
Good job!

[darkgurl]

"They say I drank to much rum, and that very well may be Last night I could have sworn, this sailing beauty made love to me" I just love these lines here, I really like this write alot. Can feel the love within this write, very well written.

[Samuel Dickens]

That's some analogy, Ray. I'd want to stay at sea and never hit port on that kind of ship. Nice job! Sam