I say NO

There is no forever

We said vows
Promised to be together forever
I thought we would stay together
You and I were one
I wanted to be forever
That is me see our future
We are not meant to last
So I will walk away
from the altar and say no
To marrying you today

Reviews

[McBear]

Deep. Very deep. I loved it

[BlaqkShadow]

I like the idea and emotion behind the poem, more punctuation would have given it a more rhythmic feel (just an opinion) but overall great job :D

[Lost In Space]

You did good on the point you were making! I just think you could've stated that point more clear and concise. Overall good job. Please give me feed back on the books I am working on, even if you dont like it. You get point either way. Anyways! Keep thinking and write on!
-Kayla Tondreau
(Check me out, please! Thanks in advance!)