The seeking

An eternal search, for the reincarnation of you

Every woman’s unborn child, each breath of fresh air

All the unmet friends, they could be, but are they, you?

 

My teacher and friend, to where, did you disappear?

I’ve let the dogs out, they are sniffing everywhere.

Hoping to find your scent, the smell of you, somewhere

 

Sometimes, I see a face, in a crowd, on a lonely street

Through a window – I see and it makes me feel

Passion, or spontaneous attraction, a connection too strong

 

The eyes that look so deeply, to touch my very soul

Is he you, who has returned?

 

Your heart was precious, like gold

Your blood was angry and red

I saw it dripping, slowly

The calm was fear

The pain was near

 

Life times later, I search for you

Longing to be close again

Our souls the same, our bodies so different

Don’t let me pass you by, on streets of loneliness…

When our eyes meet, give me the sign

Let us death defeat

 

I know you are here, My friend

Don’t ignore the truth, We belong

 

So my eternal search

Goes on and on.

Reviews

[NEHA]

"I know you are here, My friend
Don’t ignore the truth, We belong
So my eternal search
Goes on and on."
CHILLED MY SPINE AND STRETCHED MY HEART TO YELL ALOUD "WOWWW"*****
I LOVE THE EXPRESSIONS YOU'VE PUT IN!

[rachel D]

"Sometimes, I see a face, in a crowd, on a lonely street
Through a window � I see and it makes me feel
Passion, or spontaneous attraction, a connection too strong "

i feel this part so strong.
well done.

[Yvonne Heidt]

This gave me chills and it's going to haunt me.

"Every woman's unborn child, each breath of fresh air
All the unmet friends, they could be, but are they, you? "

I am forever seeing my daughter that passed away.

This is an amazing piece.

[Jack of Aces]

very cool :)
take a bow :)

[Nicole Renee]

Wow,this was very good! :D

[Shane Patrick]

another vivid piece my friend... a triumph!

[Sea Dreams ~marina~]

Wow. Some things just get better over time, like fine wine - and that it is how you write dearest. I loved this line:
'Every woman's unborn child, each breath of fresh air'. Simply stunning.
- M

[Wendy]

This is beautiful. I'm actually in awe of this piece. Keep it up =]

-Wendy

[Celtic Cat]

Absolutely stunning work. I love this. The searching for a past-life love in this life....heart-wrenching, devoted, faithful, brave.
Brilliant.
Write on!
Cat