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10 word poem for competition

Seductively your red dress stole eyes, secretly yearning goddess strength.

Author's Note

restored

Reviews

[Diane]

I love the image. It was interesting that the person within the dress is non-existent; that all eyes are fixed upon the dress, which, after all, is just one of the outer accoutrements of the person. A poem, which could be discussed on many different levels. A great response, within the limitation imposed.
Diane

[Sea Dreams ~marina~]

Ooh, very interesting!
I like it.
This looks like it could be a challenging way to write - only ten words - and you've done a great job with it.
Hmmm... it had to be a RED dress, of course!!!
- M