Dark Knight

For 10 word contest

Warm moment, tantalising guise -
Enigmatic coffee enslaves senses.
Sip punctually!

Author's Note

restored

Reviews

[m3lody mae]

I really enjoyed this write. love coffee myself

[Ivory]

I enjoyed this, and I love coffee ! lol
Good write : )

[Fantasyfairy]

I'm so glad you won this contest with this one! Nice piece, I really love it. You could almost be talking about a tall, dark lover with the words you use. SO few words, yet so well used, well done and congrats on winning hun XX

[Kim]

Warm moment, tantalising guise, I love the description of the first sip of coffee. In such few words makes my mouth water for that first cup of the day.

[Diane]

This comprises everything that is positive about coffee-drinking and, for me, the title gives the whole process a sense of chivalrous excitement and even mystery. A great effort, given the limitations.
Diane

[R J Askew]

forgot to say the word 'punctually' i like best, also enigmatic

[R J Askew]

What the hell is it about coffee?! You are right it is enigmatic. Grows in far-off places, smells supurb, and may actually be good for the heart.

[Ashentara]

this one is as great as the other one.
Enigmatic coffe enslaves senses... awesome line, where do you come up with that stuff lol

[James K. Blaylock]

Perfect for the contest. Good luck.