still life

Take a picture and suddenly freeze a momment in time .
Capture a life still and silent ,more vivid in a small still. eternity .
À soul screams ,get to know the true me.
Capture a tear as it fall's
a smile as it forms
a love as it grows
who knows ?
Capture a still life,a life still enough to be viewed in
silence ,wholeness and truth .
A life naked and open to all who will see .
look at my still life what do you see .
Can you finally see me or is it the shadow of a life
you see .À ghost of who I used to be
Capture a still life .
capture you , capture me the essence of who we are,
Who we were and who we want to be .
A still life , make the hidden seen .
so live life still for a momment in time ,
see all the things you'll find

By :butterfly desire

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Indra Neil]

a deep and riveting write! well done! :)

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Very nice poem. Frozen moment our life. Can remain us who we are and what happen to us. I like it.

[Cherry Pepperweb]

I really liked this one.
So many pictures capture that feeling felt in that moment yet, they don't tell the whole story.

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Elegant poetry...love the title and the words analogous with a still life.....a very sensitive poem.

[AmberThePuppet]

This is beautiful.. And to me this just ain't poetry but a story of a woman that expresses who she is and was.. And I guess I get a picture of what you are talking about..

[Amy R]

now this is simply beautiful.
i enjoyed this. :)
well done!

[butterfly desire]

Thank. You so much

[Amy R]

ur welcome !

[butterfly desire]

I really am grateful for all your commente
my poetry is like me putting my soul out there read moreI really am grateful for all your commente
my poetry is like me putting my soul out there
thank you for accepting it

[Amy R]

aww, its my pleasure :)