I WAS HERE

I touched your walls
I danced to the beat of your heart
I made it the soundtrack of my life
I was here

I bathed in your warm feelings
I basked in the light of your love
I swam in the deepest waters of your tears
I was here

I carved my name in your veins
I cleaned your arteries 
I sang a happy tune to your sadness
I was here 

Inside of your heart

Reviews

[The Analog Kid]

Very sweetly personal and short. Intimate and perfect:)

Deeply romanitc, and with less words more brilliant then ever. Beautiful work!

[Pratik]

Very romantic...your words give that divine feel to this piece and I love the way you conclude the poem.. its not abrupt yet it leaved the feel of things untold! Nice work Emmie :)

[Melinda Weber]

What a lovely write and feeling for this person to have, knowing that they have someone strong by them through the good and the bad.

[Eric Cox]

Beautiful and touched with sadness. Excellent work.

[TawnyBlueStar]

beautiful :D
feels like two are one living within each other
lovely poem :D

[M.E.Lyle]

What a wonderful work of art. I loved "I danced to the beat of your heart
I made it the soundtrack of my life," just greatness.

[Haunzwürthe]

What a disparity in the emotion the words "was" and "am" portray in terms of past and present tense. The shorter a poem is, the more powerful each word can be and word choice becomes all the more critical in conveying the message. Another great write. I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Shadows of Memories]

wow!what a touching poem with emotions deep to the core. u have personified the affection nd emotion and the way u streamed it thru ur heart,soul and arteries...its just so wonderful and awesome.Thanks for the invite. I loved it so much

[WhiteWillow]

Sad, because its all past tense. A love lost is a heart full of pain. This is beautiful.