I WAS HERE

I touched your walls
I danced to the beat of your heart
I made it the soundtrack of my life
I was here

I bathed in your warm feelings
I basked in the light of your love
I swam in the deepest waters of your tears
I was here

I carved my name in your veins
I cleaned your arteries 
I sang a happy tune to your sadness
I was here 

Inside of your heart

Reviews

[faint smile]

This is beautiful!!!!!

[EMMIE]

Thanks!

[kublakhan27]

This is the first piece of yours that I've read, and it's gorgeous...a cluster of devotional gestures that come together seamlessly^^

[EMMIE]

Appreciate that

[BLACK PRINCE]

your writings stir up deep emotions

[I Shred This Cabbage]

Very intimate. Precise and heartfelt. Good job.

[EmpressPoetess]

Awesome! This speaks deeply to the heart with all the emotions wrapped up tight, right there!. Love it!

[jex]

This is very affectionate and at the same time intimate. I like how you described the love that you had for the person in how you were when you were with them. Incredible poem, Emmie.

[Rene Velez]

Very nice write, heartfelt words Emmie.

[Shane Blackheart]

A wonderful poem about a loved one leaving a mark on one's heart. I really liked this, thanks for sharing it.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

oh so romantic, wonderful!