LUCIFER

LUCIFER!
YOU CAN'T TOUCH ME!
You might try me
But you can't touch me
You won't shake me
I won't betray HIM
LUCIFER, LUCIFER!
LOOK AT ME!
Tempt me again
Test me
Give the world to me
My FAITH is 
Bigger then your testing
I manifest in
The pureness of Heaven
You look at me sadly
Am I offending?
LUCIFER!
LOOK AT ME!
Your world your ways
They do not affect me

Reviews

[Cassie Fraga]

ooooooo.... strong in message... bold with spirit... I LOVE THIS!! being the kind of woman that when you wake up in the morning the devil himself says "OH DAMN... SHES UP!!" very well penned and inspiring... thank you for the great write!!
**tips my lyrical wand to you**

[Nino James P. Cuestas]

This poem's message about strong faith that you have the strength to overcome satan's temptations, so we have to pray with sincerely about our protection

Am i right Emmi?

[Rene Velez]

spiritual and taunting, shakes the very foundation, nice work.

[shultzfeather]

Lucifer, dear god do you mean like the santa thing complex?

[light and ashes]

This really reminds me of me..alot. It is basically the same thing that I say to him when he is trying to change me into being his but my faith doesn't shake because I already belong to someone him up above

[Shadows of Memories]

The lost and its frustration...again the appeal to let it be with you.... is neatly woven here. again a good shot and a finally a beautiful poem. You call the Satan, appeal to him, beg him for what all u have...may he puts u and sets u amidst the ordeals of life...but u have that strength enough to stand firm and strong and face it and never ever go back. I love the depth in it. Keep sharing.

[Pratik]

This is really different from what i have read.....when relationships are always on the verge of breaking, what a piece have you written to advocate faith and fidelity!!... very direct and nicely done :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the strong words and emotion in this poem. We need to stand strong for our belief or fall with the people lost in things of little value. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Damn Emmie. You're looking good in that Iron Shirt.
Im loving this one.