MISS ME

OPEN UP, EARTH AND SWALLOW ME!
OH, KNIFE! CUT ME AND BLEED ME
TAKE ME TO MY DEATH
SHOOT ME DOWN, GUN
RIP MY BODY WITH HOLES
LET YOUR BULLETS ENTER MY HEART
STOP THE SOUNDTRACK OF THE BEAT 
COME ON KILLERS OF THE WORLD!
I CHALLENGE YOU TODAY
TAKE MY EXISTENCE AWAY! 
WIPE ME OF THE MAP OF THIS LIFE 
COME, OH YOU WINDS OF THE OCEANS!
SWEEP ME INTO YOUR STRENGTH
THEN BLOW ME OUT OF THIS WORLD 
I WANT TO BE MISSING
I DON'T WANT TO BE HERE
HAVE YOU EVER FELT
LIKE YOU WANTED TO DISAPPEAR?   
GO TO ANOTHER PLANET
ANOTHER WORLD
WHERE NO ONE IS ANY ONE
WHERE NOTHING IS NEAR
THAT IS WHAT I FEEL RIGHT NOW
I JUST WANT TO DISAPPEAR

Author's Note

AND THAT'S JUST HOW I FEEL SOMETIMES...FEEL ME?

Reviews

[M.E.Lyle]

I wonder if we don't all go through times like these. Funny thing is, it seems as time passes we put them on the backburners of our minds and rarley thing of them again. Life has a funny way of healing itself. I can't say I know how you feel, our I feel your pain; only you know that.

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Deeply strong and hesitant through each sentence. When we feel these sort of emotions, we want to burst and sometimes outcast ourselves. A fear of disappearing into a realm of no problems or ambitions. I love this poem for its raw power and the need to shout out its message.

[Audrey Howitt]

I know the feeling intimately--so well done!!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I know this feeling well.. penned awesomely.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

I do .... powerful lines ... Hope you find the power to hold on , but the poem was good ... I love a direct simple writting
If you have something to say , say it clear and load ... and simple

Thanks Yossi

[Praiser]

Deep but said
From the way we feel sometime, but death is never the place to stay , the next time u feel that way just pray, very nice, very nice,

[Buddhistboy73]

deep! I enjoyed this piece.....and yes, I guess it's a human thing to want to disappear sometimes....I for one share your desire....sometimes...
great use of words here, and love how you conjure up these images in the readers mind...."Where no one is anyone, where nothing is near"...my favourite lines...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Yep I know how you feel... I think we all do sometimes... life can drive you crazy.
You let it all out here, no beating around the bush.