THE VOICE OF SUICIDE

HELLO THERE YOUNG ORPHAN GIRL
COME AND STEP INTO MY WORLD

Get away from me you wretched thing!

BUT YOUR THOUGHTS INVITED ME
YOU ARE SO SAD I SEE

I won't commit to you!
I will never kill me!

HELLO THERE LESBIAN
NOBODY LOVES YOU
YOU ARE A DISGRACE
COME TO ME
LOOK INTO MY FACE

Leave me be!
We are not friends you and me
I am not a disgrace
I will not look into your face
I will never kill me! 

HELLO THERE BATTERED WIFE
ARE YOU THINKING OF ME
IS THE THOUGHT OF ME SO NICE?

Yes I thought of you
But I changed my mind
I will stand tall
And leave this battered life!
So leave me be
I will never kill me!

HELLO THERE CRACK ADDICT
COME AND LET ME SHOW YOU
HOW TO END YOUR ADDICTION
I KNOW YOU THINK OF ME
WHEN THERE IS NOTHING LEFT TO BE
SMOCKED INJECTED AND INHALED

Get out of my head!
Just leave!
Why do I think of you?
Oh I am so weak!  
I will never kill me!

HELLO THERE PERFECT RICH GIRL
WHY DON'T YOU LOVE YOUR PERFECT LIFE
YOUR DADDY IS RICH AND YOUR MOMMY IS NICE
NOT ENOUGH ATTENTION? THEY NEGLECT YOUR CRIES?
COME TO ME AND END YOU LIFE

Don't speak to me!
Let these voices stop!
I have a purse full of money
But a heart full of nothing
Yes I think about you
But a thought is all you are
I will never kill me!

HELLO THERE CHILD MOLESTER 
HOW MANY BOYS AND GIRLS DID YOU RAPE TODAY?
HOW MANY OF THEM RAN AWAY?
HOW MANY OF THEM ARE YOU RELATED TO ANY WAY?
DID YOU MASTURBATE
TO THE PICTURE OF LITTLE KATE?
COME AND TAKE MY HAND
I AM YOUR PATH TO ETERNAL HELL

Oh, I am a monster!
Yes many children I raped
But to end my life...I don't want to go to hell

COME...

Leave me alone!

COME

Why should I go

COME!

Maybe I should..

COME!!!

But how...

SHOT GUN TO THE PENIS THEN ONE IN THE HEAD

Oh, I am a monster I deserve a death so great 
I've done so much evil...my own daughter I raped 
So today
I will kill me!

THEN HELL AWAITS!

Author's Note

COULD IT BE THAT MAYBE YOU ARE ONE OF THESE CHARACTERS? DO YOU IDENTIFY WITH ONE OF THEM? HAVE YOU EVER THOUGHT ABOUT SUICIDE, OR HAVE YOU EVER JUST FELT LIKE YOU WANTED TO DISAPPEAR...GO TO A PLACE WHERE NO ONE KNOWS YOU. WELL SOME OF YOU WILL SAY NO, SOME OF YOU WILL SAY YES. BUT WHO KNOWS HOW TRUTHFUL YOU ARE WITH YOUR ANSWER AND YOURSELF. ONLY GOD. AND GOD BLESS ALL THE PEOPLE SUFFERING FROM THE VOICE OF SUICIDE. I WILL NEVER KILL ME!

Reviews

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

it can happen to anyone , I guess

[Rene Velez]

deep poem filled with confliction and damnation.

[TawnyBlueStar]

love it :D
I like how there were different problems for each :) such a strong message

[Arthur Henn]

What a powerful and intense writing, a message to many and more... What a gift you are to the WC (Writer's Cafe)

Emmie - Very Powerful!

[EMF]

Brilliant work, with intense and dark dialouge. Well written and with only a few words you convey so many differing personalities. Loved it

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Fantastic!

[Ender]

:') very good.

[Audrey Howitt]

Difficult read and probably difficult to write as well--Suicide is such a loaded issue (no pun intended here). People feel strongly about it just like they feel strongly about child molesters---you do a good job of exploring the inner dialogue of the potential suicide victim--scary poem

[Sudhanshu]

This is a remarkable poem--it's like a tapestry, a mosaic composed of multiple voices speaking from different perspectives but centered around a very disturbing theme.This one should be sent for publication. i would give you 110/100 for this.
What inner turbulence brings such sad themes from your repertoire?

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Suicide is a straight ticket to hell. I can't even imagine that sort of situation. You touched the matter pretty well especially the tantalizing toward suicide. When looking back at each part where the plot continues, we found out he raped children. In that circumstance, the choice is whether to or not. I love how deep you go into this issue. Strong emotions indeed.