THE TEARS OF MY EYES

LOVE IS DEPICTED
IN THE TEARS OF MY EYES
LOOK AT HOW I CRY
I HATE IT WHEN YOU'RE HERE
BUT I MISS YOU WHEN YOU'RE GONE
LOOK AT THESE TEAR DROPS ON THE FLOOR
IT'S YOUR NAME THAT THEY CALL
IT'S BECAUSE OF YOU THAT THEY FALL
ROLLING DOWN MY NECK
I FEEL COLDER THEN ICE COLD
I NEED YOU WARMTH
I NEED YOUR ARMS
SO I CAN RUN INTO THEM
AND FEEL LIKE A QUEEN
I MISS HOW WE ARGUED
OVER THE LITTLEST THINGS
AND BLESS YOUR HEART YOU ALWAYS LET ME WIN
BUT NOW THESE TEARS KEEP FALLING
NIAGARA FALLS
NON STOP
BUT EVEN IF MY EYES DRY OUT
THEN MY HEART WILL CRY
'CAUSE WHEN I MISS YOU
THE TEARS OF MY HEART NEVER STOP

Author's Note

AWWWW. ;P I MISS _______

Reviews

[BLACK PRINCE]

keepin it real

[Stella]

Loved your poem! I liked how there was some rhyme. Missing someone is painful experience that you captured perfectly with your poem . Great Job!

[Rene Velez]

missing a loved is never easy, nice write.

[Winslow Des Totes]

Aww this is so sad, but overall very effectively powerful! Here's hoping who you miss comes home, at last. :/ (Great write!)

[Praiser]

When rain falls ,are they your tears thats falling ,when your eyes is dark for a cry
what color is the cloud when you cant say good by,
It said when your heart cry, very nice

[unknown]

This is sweet, yet sour, i guess it is bittersweet.

Painfully beautiful penned. I feel all, you say, it's so hard, to lose someone you really love. It could suck you into the ice of the earth, gasping for breath. Love your write. It's heartfelt, and that's what I love about true poetry.

[Sudhanshu]

I loved your lines " MISS HOW WE ARGUED OVER THE LITTLEST THINGS
AND BLESS YOUR HEART YOU ALWAYS LET ME WIN".

[Dahlia Phoenix]

That is painful. I can relate to this poem because back then, my heart would ache for the one I loved and even if my eyes were dry, I would still ache. It was unbearable. Now I'm happy that I'm with him. This poem speaks truth because we can never shove those deep emotions. Good poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand this poem. Hard to control emotion when we need someone close when they are far away.
"I FEEL COLDER THEN ICE COLD
I NEED YOU WARMTH
I NEED YOUR ARMS
SO I CAN RUN INTO THEM "
A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote