HATE ME

Hate me

Hate me

Pin me down then rape me

Beat me, daily

Hit me

Take me out completely

Kill me or leave me

Half alive just breathing

Take a knife and cut me

Make me

Ugly

Disable me then put me

In a wooden box and shove me

Deep in the ground forget me

See, you can break me

Physically make me

Do things that make me crazy

But you’ll never take the SOUL of me

My SPIRIT is uplifting

And forever is existing

You’ll never break the HEART of me

My INNER STRENGTH is holding me

This SOUL of me

Is overshadowing

This painful physicality

This SOUL of me

It’s big beyond these walls you build so violently

Hate me

Hate me

Pin me down and rape me

Beat me, break me

But you’ll never break the HEART of me

My INNER STRENGTH is holding me

You’ll never break this SOUL of me!!!

Reviews

[Haunzwürthe]

What makes you a great writer is that you don't hold back, don't sugar coat, or gloss over stuff like this. You don't plagiarize a thesaurus trying to use all the cool words or ones that are less seething. You put it out there to where no one can hide from the truth. That's simply what it is, truth. I find myself not wanting to read, not because of guilt, language, or subject, but because in the back of our mind, we want to think that everyone is happy. Nothing bad happens, we are all safe. When the truth is, we aren't all happy, we aren't all safe. This s**t happens everyday and some people live in a false sense of security that isn't the truth. You tell the truth Emmie, don't stop.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are a amazing writer. So much emotion and strength in this poem. The poem got stronger and the point more clearer with each line. Your words were honest and strong. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Eagle Cruagh]

Very clever, very appropriate for our time.
I hope you avoid violent people in real
life.
Great writing. I hope to see more very
soon. Thank you
---- Eagle Cruagh

[roy mccarthy]

awesome write,
strong words!
it does sound like it could be a song :)

[Winslow Des Totes]

This would make an amazing song; it's very powerful and the flow is supreme. Great write!!! :D