BELLISSIMA

So much color on that little flower   

Morning sun rays gently waking its allure 

The essence of love

Created by the Almighty 

Nature's irresistible aroma 

Fresh and joyful colors 

Oh, what a sight to see! 

That lovely little flower

Just laying there....

                                                                                                                     On a lonely grave   

Author's Note

Lol one of these days I'll write something that's a 100% happy with no dark or sad twists I promise! Lol one of these days...

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

The twisted end We all know it is our own tale as well as nature is beautiful we are finite

[Eric Cox]

A very beautiful beginning of nature's beauty and God above and then the shock of the sadness of death's reality, our souls leaving our loved ones with an echo of us. A strong write. So well penned.

[EMMIE]

Thank you, Eric!

[Eric Cox]

You're welcome.

[Heromen Selena]

Hahaha yep one day you might. However the use of a grave hits the reader and its good for the poem. Nice job

[zainul]

I have the least words to grace the golden piece that the Almighty has done some trick!

[EMMIE]

lol thank you

[zainul]

You are most welcome :)

[Renée]

oh ... reading along and then zing what a impact that made !

[EMMIE]

Ha ha! Thanks for taking the time

[Renée]

a pleasure ( :

[The Analog Kid]

You juxtapose life on death which creates beautiful art. Poets, musicians, and artists all appreciate the melancholy. If you didn't, you'd just write love poems that were mediocre, right?

[EMMIE]

Ha ha true enough. Thank you!

[The Analog Kid]

YW..anytime:)

[Coffee Vampier]

Such a light it brings to the usual dismay of death, it shows to me that maybe it should be as feared as most people tend to fear death but more embraced to see the light at the end.

[EMMIE]

Thank you much!

[Coyote Poetry]

Flowers are positive. Life upon death create hope. I like the description and how you ended the poem. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MandaBear]

It is very interesting. I liked how you mixed the light and the dark together. Very well done!

[EMMIE]

Thank You

[khalid]

mixture between flowers with their sweet colors and nice essences with graves with how much fearing they look..i like it..

[EMMIE]

Thank ya!