THE STOLEN GOODS
A Poem by
EMMIE
Brown hands are red in the white sea Picking white things in the scorching yellow Tired drops of sweat fall from the bodies Skin deep beauty stolen from the Mother Land Forced to travel in hell on water Brought to the White Land to serve the superior Cry little girl don't you stop For your mami and daddy are rotting fruits on a tree Soon master will grab your brown neck with his white claws Billie Holiday sweetly sang in Strange Fruit: "Scent of magnolias, sweet and fresh Then the sudden smell of burning flesh" The stolen goods Properties in a land where color is sin
But now they are spirits and alive in death For in Heaven power voices sweetly sing: "FREEDOM AT LAST!
© 2015 EMMIE
Author's Note
Look up the song Strange Fruit by Billie Holiday on YouTube
Reviews
Holy hell.
Emmie, you rock. That is solid and I dig for sure. Wild. I really don't know what to say other than, wow.
Keep those lines flowing
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
thank ya lol
Damn! you grab reality by the Chode, Pull and Twist!
Structure? Check
Graphic? Check
Poetic?... Check
Easy to Read?... Hell to F****n No!, Not even in cashmere blankets with down feather bedding and Hot Coco!
Great Job! Mission Accomplished!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Damn! you grab reality by the Chode, Pull and Twist!
Structure? Check
Graphic? Check
Poetic?... Check
Easy to Read?... Hell to Fuckin No!, Not even in cashmere blankets with down feather bedding and Hot Coco!
Great Job! Mission Accomplished!
11 Years Ago
Ha ha ha. the best review ever! Thanks!
Yes, I'm familiar with that song. This is powerful stuff, capable of seizing the hearts of us who have hearts. For some, I guess nothing will ever bring them around, though we must continue to hope.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Yes, I'm familiar with that song. This is powerful stuff, capable of seizing the hearts of us who have hearts. For some, I guess nothing will ever bring them around, though we must continue to hope.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much!
powerful yet subversive.....I really like this and it counters against the non culture youth coming up. This is a great proud piece. Powerful
Posted 12 Years Ago
powerful yet subversive.....I really like this and it counters against the non culture youth coming up. This is a great proud piece. Powerful
Inspirational and thought provoking. And after reading this metaphorically powerful piece ...I'm going straight to some Billie Holiday now
Posted 12 Years Ago
Inspirational and thought provoking. And after reading this metaphorically powerful piece ...I'm going straight to some Billie Holiday now
12 Years Ago
Lol, good for you Billie is amazing! Thank you!
An excellent anti slavery piece with good metaphor use and good flow. The Billie Holiday quote is nice.
Posted 12 Years Ago
An excellent anti slavery piece with good metaphor use and good flow. The Billie Holiday quote is nice.
12 Years Ago
Thank you much!
Abel Meeropol originally wrote the lyrics to Strange Fruit as a poem. At the time it was thought to be strange that a white man be so moved enough to be inspired to write this poem. He eventually set it to music and it was picked up by Billie Holiday. The strong lyrics of that song match the strong words you have within this piece. We all get inspired, heck some of the poetry that I read inspires me especially because most of the time I can relate in some way to what the author is saying.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Abel Meeropol originally wrote the lyrics to Strange Fruit as a poem. At the time it was thought to be strange that a white man be so moved enough to be inspired to write this poem. He eventually set it to music and it was picked up by Billie Holiday. The strong lyrics of that song match the strong words you have within this piece. We all get inspired, heck some of the poetry that I read inspires me especially because most of the time I can relate in some way to what the author is saying.
12 Years Ago
Very true. Thank you!
I like the reference to the good music and the strong poetry. Poetry support to make you think. Your poem did. Life lead us to good and bad places. Sometime the last stop the pain. A very nice ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote
Posted 12 Years Ago
I like the reference to the good music and the strong poetry. Poetry support to make you think. Your poem did. Life lead us to good and bad places. Sometime the last stop the pain. A very nice ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote
12 Years Ago
Thank you, Coyote!
Powerful moving write , stolen lives , haunting song too.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Powerful moving write , stolen lives , haunting song too.
12 Years Ago
Thank you much!
amazing write
Posted 12 Years Ago
amazing write
12 Years Ago
Appreciate =)
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