"just so"

This is a translation of a poem originally written in a language different than English.

"just so"

Pain. Pain and suffering

suffering in love

and love in pain.
How to comprehend

all of this with our

small human

brain when you are

standing on this border...

on the verge of pain

and death.

Author's Note

This is a translation of a poem originally written in a language different than English, which is why I'm not sure if it works well...

Reviews

[KAREN]

A strong poem and very dark write! Excellent!!

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

really powerful words, and it works really well.

[Tasha]

I think it works, it works very well. :)