All, but nothing

This is my first attempt at a Cinquain Poem. For a contest on the "I Challenge You" group.

dreams
utterly ridiculous
coiling, swirling, twirling
Dreams never come true.
delusion

Author's Note

This is my first attempt at a Cinquain Poem. For a contest on the "I Challenge You" group.

Reviews

[Anna Baker]

I love it. Fabulous job :)

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

Absolutely amazing, and so incrediably true!! Fabulous job!!!

[Tasha]

I liked it

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[John Jackson (El Juero)]

I love this! There are three forms of Cinquian, this one being the hardest-You nailed it!
Wonderful poem.

[SheWhoWillNotBeNamed]

@ SW: At first I found it weird, but then I kinda just flew... I'm always up for a challenge, up for something new, so that worked fine. Ty for the opportunity to widen my horizons, SW.

[SpokenWord]

You did very well on this! I like it a lot. Did you find it easy to write or was it more difficult from your normal style?