"Hollow"

I often feel empty inside, but then I get hit and I can enjoy my life once again.

"Hollow"
Somewhere between sorrow and grief,
there is a moment of relief.
A moment so precious and bright,
when everything just seems so right.
A moment so frisky and rare,
that you are not able to dare.
A moment so crazy I swear,
in which you don't know what to wear.
Relief is like a holiday,
that doesn't happen every day.
That's why you need to treasure it,
that's why you need to know the wit...
Relief is just a second
of a lifetime, so quit
complaining and start smiling.

Author's Note

Feel free to comment:)

Reviews

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

I agree with Ta'shandra!!!

[Tasha]

Wow! The imagery was right on point. I loved and enjoyed this! :)

So truthful, this is a real gem of a write & so poetic, well done!

[KAREN]

A poem that people can learn from! Well done!

[Grim]

True. I guess that we all need those moments, much more often please!
Nice poem, will remember it as a lesson ;) I kind of lost the feeling in the end, maybe because there's no rhyme of "smiling" but still a good one.
Keep on going ;)