i runaway form love

I run away form love

 

  i run away form all love

islate my self form others

yet the pain wont leave

i cry relizing no one loves me

i run away form love

i stare so longinly at the boy

he just thinks im weird

i run away form love.......

and life.

Reviews

[nora]

Okay.
*sigh*
I'm your sister, so I'm allowed to rip this apart if I feel like it. And I'm in a constructive-critism mood. I'm just going to give you a lot of suggestions.
First, start using Microsoft Word. That way there won't be anymore awful spelling mistakes :) All you have to do is type it up in Word, then copy it, paste it into the box, and that would already make your poetry a lot better. Because, honestly, the spelling mistakes are taking a lot away from the writing.
Next, on to the actual poem. It's a bit repetitive. Like, you use the line 'I run away from love' quite often, but not consistently enough to have it work properly. There should probably be an even amount of lines in between each repeat for a poem of this size.
There are also some minor grammatical errors.
But, this was not bad poem on whole. The message was a little overused, but not necessarily bad. Your line about isolating yourself was pretty interesting, actually, because as you become a teenager, that sort of angst always happens ;) So having people relate to your poetry it great! Also, I loved the line where you added "I run away from love... and life." This hinted at a fact that maybe there is no true life without love, any sort of love. Interesting thought :)
Anyway, keep it upp :D