Immortality

Every day the sun rises,

Every day the sun sets

Every day someone is born,

Everyday someone dies

It is the natural circle of life

Everything dies at one point,

But what if you never do

What if you stand there,

watching time pass

As people grow older,

and eventually die

While you never age,

And continue to live

What if everyone you knew,

slowly wrinkled and aged,

while you never looked a day older

What if everyone you met,

eventually left you behind,

leaving you with nothing left

What if you found someone,

you really loved,

but had to watch them,

grow old and die

while you stayed young

surviving despite the ages

What if you had given up on the world

given up trying to meet people,

get to know anyone,

get to love someone

but no matter what you did,

or how much time passed,

you couldn't die

What if you were,

forever and always

immortal

Reviews

[Luisa König]

It's a very interesting thought ad very well written :)
Thank you for your submission

[crispycream]

This is so good! You probably get this a lot but I reminds me a lot of what would feel after a few decades of being a vampire

[El Chico]

I like the perspective...great poem !

[JC]

To be honest...I would love it! You pose interesting questions here in a nice flow. Good job.

[buterfligirl]

thanks a lot