Say That You Love Me

Another old one.

Gone, gone, gone away,

as back and forth,

my mind does sway.

 

Say, Say,

what troubles you?

Maybe it troubles me too!

 

Every day,

single day,

it's you I think of,

feeling my heart,

could fly in the love,

up, away, and above!

 

I pray, I pray,

that maybe someday,

before I've gone away,

you'll come and say,

say that you love me,

because to my heart,

you hold the key,

can't you see?

Say that me you love me,

and set me free!

Reviews

[Chris]

I find this one rather brilliant. My favorite part is the very beginning,

"Gone, gone, gone away,
as back and forth,
my mind does sway."

The first few words set the mood quite well. Bravo, Lily.