I am in my Mind

written: Monday, November 13, 2006

 

Overpopulated thoughts consume my patience,
i am struggling with ease,
my hormones need assistance,
so easy to please,
i break, i fake, i intake

my concerns
as they blow from my gaseous veins,
my strive in life is implacable,
to understand my regrets,
to feel my eagerness growing,
i want to be my dreams,
maybe there different they yours,
i am in fault with my subconscious,
why i strain and pain,
is only of my knowing,
I’m still figuring it out

Twenty cycles around a helium star,
I’m afar in mind,
and contained on land,

to see with transparent,
unravel my opaque,
skin cells degenerating

awake me

take me

to the end of everything

 

Reviews

[Philip Muls]

Yes! Love it, it is borderline on going out of your mind. Close to insane, locked up in your mind. Could you read my story Tipping point, maybe you can relate.

[Melaniespace]

Thank you. I know it’s two years later. I’ve never been very good at using this site socially. I need to read your writings. I appreciate you thank you again.

[RAWR!]

gawd
the imagery is stunning
this poem reminds me of a fresh fruit plucked from a tree

[An owl on the moon]

So moving and deep. Amazing write! You capture so perfectly the floating banter of the mind...

Craig

[Melaniespace]

Thank you. That’s what it’s all about. 👍🏽

[An owl on the moon]

So good to have you here over these years. :)