rock a bay baby

rock a bay baby

A Poem by bunny

Rock a by baby, on the treetop,

when the wind blows, the cradle will rock,

No one can escape the cradle of death;

it leaves behind a lifeless corpse.

I don't know how to handle this terrifying world,

I'd rather just stay far back.

I can still remember the little one up to this day,

and look, my heart is black.

This world is full of corrupted people,

their sins all add on forever,

I am one of them, the definitely one,

Because I can never stop sinning, never.

I don't know how to handle this terrifying world,

I'd rather just stay far back,

I can still remember the little one up to this day,

and look, my heart is black.

There is no end to my sadness and rage,

The hatred I had through all this days,

I'll never let go, oh, never let go,

I'll have to keep it in all of my ways.

I don't know how to handle this terrifying world,

I'd rather just stay far back,

I can still remember the little one up to this day,

and look, my heart is black.

I don't know how to handle almost everything,

I wish I was never born.

There is no more point in living this life,

My heart has already been torn.

I wish I knew how to handle this world,

I seek for power to know,

I never thought I could be so low.

I was just an experiment and nothing else,

for my father, he was a witch.

my torn heart was stitched back,

but now I tore the stitch.

From this place I have created just for myself,

nothing will come, nothing will go.

I would rather just stay and do nothing at all,

look, here's comes the shadow.

I don't know how to handle this terrifying world,

I'd rather just stay far back,

I can still remember the little one up to this day,

and look, my heart is black.

Rock a by baby, on a treetop,

when the wind blows, the cradle will rock

 

© 2013 bunny


Author's Note

bunny
this is crap isn't it

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I think It's a wonderful poem. You should join my group we are always welcome to new members. ^-^

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow! You have done great work. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bunny

11 Years Ago

Well thank you glad you like it
This is far from crap. This was amazing! I loved it, and even though I haven't watched the anime, I kept thinking this is something Crona from Soul Eater would write. It was great! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bunny

11 Years Ago

hehe thank you
Dark Rider

11 Years Ago

You're welcome. ^^
Lino Rie

11 Years Ago

Wanted to tell you Crona is a boy.
Nononono!! I LIKE IT!!
It's a really cool twist to the lullaby, and I love how heartfelt it is.
The lullaby is a symbol for the lost innocence. I LOVE IT XD!!!!
A MILLION GOLD STARS!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bunny

11 Years Ago

yay!! gold stars! thank you!
Diasha

11 Years Ago

★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★
bunny

11 Years Ago

Yes! Thank you !
no it is not crap this is very good i like it

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bunny

11 Years Ago

Really well I'm glad you like it!
This isn't crap, don't treat your work like that even if thought it wasn't good. This really matches Krona's character, this is what goes on deep in his mind. Good job! (Soul Eater)

Posted 11 Years Ago


bunny

11 Years Ago

really thank you i was hoping for a crona-ness and ye some one who thinks hes a guy!
This is not crap at all. So very well written and you really get the reader sucked in to read it. Awesome work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bunny

11 Years Ago

THANK YOU!! :3
MandaBear

11 Years Ago

Your welcome =)
It's not crap! It's haunting, and well-written, and I loved it! Especially the repeated stanza. Adds great emphasis to the overall theme. Very nice :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bunny

11 Years Ago

really? thank you! sorry if this haunts your dreams.....
Felicity's Eve

11 Years Ago

Lol
bunny

11 Years Ago

:D

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