GOODBYE SUMMER

this is a poem about how bad it sucks that summers almost over.

GOODBYE SUMMER

 

The gentle winds of summer dying slowly into fall.

 

Looking back onto the sweet memories which are treasured in us all.

 

The delightful taste of freedom, broken, only to be locked in habbit once again.

 

For we have fallen short of summer, perhaps the sweetest taste of sin.

 

The dim days are approaching swiftly.

 

We will have to prepare quickly as well.

 

To our dismay we will have to go back to school.

Village christian or as i call it, HELL!!!!

 

oOo KyRa oOo

 

Author's Note

Yah this is a poem about how depressed i am to go back to HELL! AKA school

Reviews

[nora]

haha! great poem, kyra!
you know, you have a really great wya with words, btw.
of course, the idea behind this is something we can all relate to. haha, especially me, i just headed off to high school (ew).

'The delightful taste of freedom, broken, only to be locked in habbit once again.'

this part, it just took my breath away. you took a slightly humorous topic and just made it beautiful, especially this line. its just, like, magic or something. great job :D

[Phenomena]

hahahahahahahahahahaha u got that rite sista!!!!!!!XD and we're also going back to the town of which lurks koolaidman's empire LMAO!!!! I never knew the end of summer would sound so... so fluid and graceful. FANTASTIC WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!=D

[lauren emily]

Hahaha...The end of summer...such a horrible thing :( But don't worry, fall will be over quickly and then winter will be here and you know what that means....Vacation time!!! :)
Very nice write. I really enjoyed reading it :)

~Lauren