Of All The Things Elastic

Of All The Things Elastic

A Poem by Ruminating Archaeologist
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like rubber bands like stretch jeans like twizzlers .-.

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like a machine
pretty perks, the tumbleweeds
growing down over my ankles
vines wrapped around my sleeves
won't you come get to me
won't you come to escape me
won't you come to save me
won't you come to rehabilitate me

like electronic wave-compassing distance
like going farther than you're expected to be
like childhood dreams and warm sweater sleeves
won't you let me break free
won't you let me get free
won't you let me be free

pretty sky surrounding light waves
feeling finding found a niche
I have never been farther
I have never been to bother
I have never buried treasure
I have never treasure-found
I have never been around
I have never been sound

© 2011 Ruminating Archaeologist


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I enjoyed reading this. It flowed with a deep resonance, letting my mind ponder a great many things as my eyes took in each line. I like pieces like this, one's that make one think.

Great Ink!
Wolfie

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

each is a set piece and each has its own taste...

unique HAS a meaning sometime...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ruminating Archaeologist
Ruminating Archaeologist

Paradoxical Cerebrum, IN



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Since 8th grade, I've been writing and I honestly can say I've improved. My deviant art account is normally where I'm stationed, and I use it frequently. I also have a fanfiction.net account, and I'm .. more..

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